POSTER:
1. Lighten or remove seaweed hanging off the model as it is overpowering and too dark. This takes away focus from the headpiece which is the focal point of the poster.
2. Zoom in on the model and lower her so only the top half of the body is visible. Although it's cutting off the rest of the bikini the top half is still visible enough to show she's wearing beach clothes.
3. Make the font a color that corresponds with skin tone and darker colors - this will be a challenge.
4. Possibly add more detail to head piece.
WEBSITE:
1. Change the vectored animals to look more distressed/littered on as this is the theme of the poster.
2. Put clothes on vectored humans to continue beach theme like on model.
3. Color scheme does not quite work with the poster - this is due to using photography for the background then changing them to a negative/divide. Introducing new ideas/developments are not ideal at this point, so I need to keep the background to a solid color with a subtle gradient. Less filters and effects, more solid colors.
4. Try having a white border on each page
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